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Post by Razar on Aug 15, 2017 16:56:41 GMT
  Basics Adoption thread link: suodimirp.boards.net/thread/94/icaras-adopts *Name: Usur-t-kau Nickname: Callie *Class: Bird *Species: Secretary bird *Age: Teenager *Gender: Female Sexuality: asexual
*Skills:
*Positive: hunting,Ground speed,Ground agility
*Negative: fighting,swimming, stealth
*Neutral: strength, Flight speed, flight agility
*Appearance
*Body size: small, lithe
*Color: White and Black feathers
*Eye color: Brown
Significant features : N/A
*Personality: Friendlier and not as proud as her sister Nefer,Tries to make friends with whoever she meets.
Positive: accessible, benevolent, calm
Negative: anxious, easily trusting , too talkative
Neutral: impressionable, neutral,sociable
Likes: Friends, Family, Her sister. .
Dislikes: Vicious animals or bullies
Fears: She fears of being captured by any tribe or worse.
Ambitions/goals: To survive, and avoid as many Jaguars, Pirates as well other hostile creatures as possible.
*Rank: traveler
*Personal history: Separated from her sister, she often travels across suodimi to places she can survive in, one time she accidentally discovered that Villa Corvida does exist, she visits the city often because most of her friends live there, she may visit her sister once in a while too, though one time she almost died in the jungle, because of this she hates jaguars and other vicious creatures, hoping to discover more wonders one day.
*Current home: Villa Corvida
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Post by Icara on Aug 15, 2017 18:52:54 GMT
Nice app! Though there is one little problem: you said that she tries to make friends with whoever she meets, but is also very shy, and that's quite contradicting, so please change one of those things  |
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Post by Razar on Aug 16, 2017 17:29:23 GMT
Hopefully Fixed.
(Sorry whenever I have errors in character creations I tend to feel mad at myself, but I try to stay calm so I don't cause trouble)
Should I change some of her traits?
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Post by Icara on Aug 16, 2017 18:22:01 GMT
Again in the traits you have accessible and one line below you have anxious and shy - thus it's contradicting again. And other contradicting thing - you listed calm as positive and impatient as negative. And calm and impatient are pretty much the opposite. But other than that the traits are alright Do you know what helps when creating a character? Try to picture them like in a movie or real-life, put them into different situations and see how they act, or choose one trait that is typical for them and branch out the other traits And don't be mad, everyone makes mistakes. Remember, you learn from mistakes and each time you get better |
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Post by Razar on Aug 17, 2017 16:10:25 GMT
? Im kind of confused now. Can you help me, because I dont know what to choose thats not contradicting.
Can you give me some ideas that may fit her character traits?
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Post by Icara on Aug 17, 2017 16:32:42 GMT
Well, would you like her more friendly and social, or more shy?
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Post by Razar on Aug 17, 2017 16:39:53 GMT
Friendly and Social
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Post by Icara on Aug 18, 2017 7:05:54 GMT
Then you can add 'friendly' and 'sociable' to positive or neutral traits, and as a negative choose something that comes with it, maybe 'too talkative'? Or 'easily trusting'? You can also look at Nefer's personality. They are sisters, so there can be similarities
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Post by Razar on Aug 19, 2017 16:16:58 GMT
Ill use your suggestions for now, (Ill think of adding more of a history to my pirate bird when I think of something too.)
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Post by Icara on Aug 22, 2017 14:00:10 GMT
Usur-t-kau has been accepted and you may now roleplay with (her. Don't forget to post in Allegiances and Used names! |
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